A crowd formed on Saturday September 13 the Boys and Girls club of Sacramento held a live benefit on the block of 20th and Capitol to help support an after school art program.
In attendance were the Atomic Kings a local band who specializes in cover songs by artist such as Aerosmith.
The Atomic Kings were the headlining attraction at the event and drew the largest crowd.
Also in attendance was the local band Grenade Jumper they drew the second largest crowd with their heavy metal and punk rock style they proceeded to entertain a very receptive crowd.
According to Alan Barber an auto-body shop owner and a vendor at the event “These events go over very well and I expect we will raise the funds needed.”
Alan also said “these types of events are wonderful it brings the community together and makes them more aware of not only the boys and girls club, but of the other local businesses in the midtown area of Sacramento.”
The Atomic Kings were the headlining attraction at the event and drew the largest crowd.
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Good event to cover! And video too! Congrats!
Don't start the lead with WHEN. And don't start a sentence with attribution (the recent news on the BGCSAC.org stated that...).
Lead with the most interesting part of the sentence, the subject.
Some grammar and punctuation issues, which we'll review in class.
Could you include more specifics about the event.
What other bands played? Who are the Atomic Kings, how many people in the band?
How many people attended?
Could you find out how much $ they raised, or hoped to raise?
This story can be easily fixed with revisions and a little more info.
Good work!
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